Can someone help me with my grammar in English assignment?

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Hello, I am the broading student from Taiwan.

I am going to hand in an assignment to my teacher.

And my teacher is very strict that he will make me fail (only fail this work not the whole semester) if my grammar in the assignment is bad.

I hope someone can help me correcting this assignment.

thank you

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Andy who had a hard time during his childhood is my father.His family was very

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Hope your work is fine by you after I proofreading it.

Andy is my father who had a hard time during his childhood.  His family was very
poor in which he was the youngest one.  In the family, there are thirteen children, so it is a very big problem for such a poor family.
(He is from a big and poor family that there are 13 children, and he is the youngest one.  Because of too many children, it is such a big problem for his parents to raise children.)
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